Thursday, September 20, 2012

De`ja' Voodoo



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The prompt: "Zombies"


De`ja' Voodoo

History was repeating itself.  
Ancient echoes tear hungrily at her soul.
Fear and darkness leave her immobile.
She knows with certainty she will never be free.
Surrendering hope, she is consumed.

                    Story & Image By: McGuffy Ann Morris






11 comments:

  1. LOVED this!!!! Thank you! Take care
    x

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  2. I really enjoyed this. Sometimes less is more. Well done!

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  3. This has the making of an interesting kind of spooky story poem I think. I would love to read the next verses and read about when she woke up and the sun was shining through a tiny opening in the curtains...

    Thanks for leaving a comment on my blog. I always appreciate your visits.

    JB

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  4. This is great. So much said in so few words.

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  5. Annie! This is a whole new side of you... Dark and deep! Very impressive, and again so much said in few words. This is truly awesome!

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  6. So beautiful and heartbreaking with such a loss of hope...

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  7. Lovely piece, Ann. So simple, yet powerful.

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  8. Reads almost like poetry. So many possible interpretations. Thanks for sharing!!

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  9. You consumed her in 5 sentences ... you are powerful:)
    As always ... superlative!

    Andrea

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  10. I agree with Angela! This is so simply and eloquent...could be taken so many different ways, which is always wonderful for the reader :)

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