LOVED this!!!! Thank you! Take carex
I really enjoyed this. Sometimes less is more. Well done!
This has the making of an interesting kind of spooky story poem I think. I would love to read the next verses and read about when she woke up and the sun was shining through a tiny opening in the curtains... Thanks for leaving a comment on my blog. I always appreciate your visits. JB
This is great. So much said in so few words.
Annie! This is a whole new side of you... Dark and deep! Very impressive, and again so much said in few words. This is truly awesome!
So beautiful and heartbreaking with such a loss of hope...
Lovely piece, Ann. So simple, yet powerful.
Reads almost like poetry. So many possible interpretations. Thanks for sharing!!
You consumed her in 5 sentences ... you are powerful:)As always ... superlative!Andrea
I agree with Angela! This is so simply and eloquent...could be taken so many different ways, which is always wonderful for the reader :)