I like this one very much. It made me smile.Have a terrific day. :)
Thanks, Sandee. It's true.
Oh Annie ... I love this!
Thank you, Beth. I'll bet you had one!
cool take, Annie.
Thank you, LaTonya. I appreciate that.
Oh, so THAT'S where my childhood went! :)I loved this haiku very much, McGuffy Ann.
I am sure that is where mine is. Thanks!
Those were the days! But the memories still remain! Nicely McGuffy!Hank
Yes, Hank, they sure were. Thanks.
You are bringing back sweet memories.Thanks.JB
I am so glad, Julia! Hugs!
Many warm memories passed through the hole :)Nice one Ann!!
Yes, they did. Thank you, Reshma.
that 2nd line gives the reader a complete and wonderful surprise. Brilliant!
Thank you, Lolly. I am glad you like it.
I loved the simplicity of this Haiku, Annie, reflecting the simplicity that childhood was meant to be. For some it slipped away, from others it was stolen.
That is true, Josie. It should be simple.
Lovely piece...You could look at it as the beauty of childhood or that point in life when childhood ends
Thanks, Susan. Indeed, bittersweet.
Beautiful Haiku...were we on the same page when we wrote..have a look for yourself..http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/ah-swinging-childhoodhaiku.html#comment-formRS
Yes, we certainly were. Thanks for coming by.
Brings memories! Have a nice week ahead!
Thank you very much, Joy. I? Glad you enjoyed this.
Honestly....can't wait to check back mine!:)Lovely!
Thank you, Panchali. I appreciate your comments.
Beautiful haiku sad and sweet =)
Thank you. Tire swings make me feel that way.
So that's where it is! It would be nice to jump through a magic swing for a day and experience that joy again.
I love this thought! Thanks for that!
Beautiful and very descriptive of how I feel much of the time!! Where has time gone???
Indeed, Beth Ann. I wonder, too.
Those were such happy days when children were unaware of sophisticated toys and mere tyres and ropes sufficed to give great pleasure!! Beautiful memories revived!!
The simple pleasures are always the best ones!
So many hours spent swinging and laughing!! Gone in a flash it would seem!
It certainly flew by, didn't it?
this brings back some sweet childhood memories of not just tire swings, but hayloft ones and falling into cool lake water from a tree swing. lovely
Yes...all of that. Thanks.