Sunday, October 12, 2014

Horizon


The Ferris wheel lifted her high above the lights and noise of the only life she knew. Though shallow, her roots were here below her, but did not allow for growth. 

Deep down, she knew that it was time to find her own place in the world. As she rose above the chaos, she realized the answer was out there, just beyond the horizon. With firm resolve, she knew she would find it and make it her own.


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Word Prompt: Horizon

27 comments:

  1. Everything has been making mom very sad lately, and for some reason this sunset was no exception; even though, the story is uplifting and the photo so gorgeous. Sending purrs and prayers to Chloe Jo and love to all. XOCK, Lily Olivia, Mauricio, Misty May, Giulietta, Fiona, Astrid, Lisbeth and Calista Jo

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  2. That is a great story. You do such a good job - it's interesting, to the point, and conclusion. You are a very talented lady. I'm still purring for Chloe Jo. We hope she's feeling a bit better today.

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  3. For some reason this is a difficult 5 sentence fiction for me to relate to today... I'm trying here...
    Maybe this fictitious character's life is leading nowhere and the only way to change is to get out of her comfort zone.

    Hugs,
    JB

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  4. Great photo and great writing!

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  5. Mom says you've painted a very detailed picture with so few words.

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  6. What a neat blog hop! That photo is beautiful, and those short five sentences were very well written.

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  7. Beautiful. Sometimes getting a different view/perspective makes all the difference, right?

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  8. Beautiful sky photo, McGuffy.
    BTW - I have added a Subscribe by Email link to my blog.
    I hope it works for you.
    If it does not or I can do something else better, please let me know.
    Thanks for the nice suggestion and your visits.
    Peace :)

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  9. Sometimes you just have to break free, and i hope she does!

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  10. I enjoyed this and knew exactly how she felt!

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  11. She is moving hgh, away in the right direction for change. Great writing~

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  12. I really enjoyed reading your post and that is because I can so relate to it. It is with great resolve and strength that one can truly find one's true calling and make a place for oneself in this world. Great to have met you! :-)

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  13. Great job on this meme! Breaking free...ahhhhh!

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  14. That was super duper!

    Noodle and crew

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  15. Beautiful and hopeful 5Sentence.
    Best wishes.

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  16. It took the ride on the Ferris Wheel to show her the horizon. Great;)

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  17. a nice beginning to what sounds like a grand adventure!

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  18. Life can be chaotic and noisy and we need to get some distance from it to see what is, or isn't, working for us.

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  19. Ah yes, having the self-confidence and certainty to strike out on your own, now that's the key to opening up your life...

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