Saturday, March 14, 2015

Vindictive


There was no rhyme, no reason, and no method to her madness.

Smirking, she stood firm in her misguided rebellion.  Only silence filled the void between them now.

Reaching out one final time, he asked, “Why?” 

In smug defiance, she said, “Because I can.” 


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Word Prompt: Vindictive

19 comments:

  1. I like how you left it for us to decide what was between them. Also, the last killer line "Because I can". Great job!

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  2. Nice when we realize the power. Can do spirit is great! :)

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  3. Good for her I say. I have no idea what the problem is between the two but I'm glad she is taking back her power. I love the hands on the hips in the shadow. A defiant pose.
    Hugs,
    JB

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  4. There have been times i've felt both sides of this. Excellent.

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  5. Sounds like me...so naturally I love it!...:)JP

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  6. Beautiful, thank you I love it.

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  7. oooohhhhh -- gave me chills!!

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  8. hmmm....makes me think of suspense :)

    Hope your having a great evening.
    Still no news....I'm prayed up about it, but it is a bit nuts that we haven't heard.

    I have a finished review that I really need to get posted.
    I have been chosen to be a reviewer for Focus on the Family's `Adventures in Odyssey`
    Now only if I can get it to work on my computer.
    It's through iTunes, but the app is for Apple products (IPhone, IPad, ...)
    So I'm trying to figure out how to receive it on my computer :(

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  9. That's an excellent piece of writing... She can!!

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  10. This is a good story because it gets to the essence of the prompt without cluttering it with details! That's not easy to do!

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  11. Great take on the prompt. I really liked it a lot!

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  12. That looks really vindictive. Much said in few words.

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  13. Excellently done and the photo is perfect. Hugs, Janet

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